July 31, 2017
Makeover Monday: The 28th SEA Games
Let's have a look at the original viz:
What works well?
- The different backgrounds for the sections help split apart the viz and inform you that they are to be read independently.
- It's very informative about the games overall.
What could be improved?
- The parts are all disjointed.
- There's no overall story.
- When I ask "so what?", I can't answer it.
Again, sorry for the brevity this week; I really need to be spending time with my family. Here's my Makeover Monday submission.
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