Makeover Monday: What is the UK's Favorite Chocolate Bar?

• The bump chart is a very nice visual display for ranked data.
• Including the rank as a number at each point.
• The lines are easy to follow.
• Labeling both the left and right side so that you don't have to trace the line back to the start when you get to the end.
• Using a different mark type when the chocolate is not ranked.
• Simple title and subtitle.

What could be improved?

• This is a LOT of colors and some of them are very close to each other.
• Why are there age bands missing?

• Split each of the age groups out rather than connecting them and then include a total, which is the average across the age groups. I'm making the assumption here that the same number of people were surveyed in each age group. 
• Display the data as a dot plot along a scale from 0-10 for each chocolate bar for each age group
• Use a brown theme to go with the connotative color of chocolate
• Color the values using a brown scale